But there was one scene in Veiled Rose that particularly intrigued me, featuring a character who, though he only appears briefly, captured my imagination. That character was Captain Sunan, a man of mysterious powers and intellect.
Here is the scene from Veiled Rose which inspired the story of Goddess Tithe . . . though you will see it in Goddess Tithe from a very different perspective!
Excerpt from
VEILED ROSE
“Shall I bring him in, captain?”
“Yes.”
“He’s a sullen one. Not trustworthy.
Shall I bind him?”
“That will not be necessary.”
Captain Sunan of the Kulap Kanya sat at a narrow desk in his
cabin, keeping the ship’s log. Today’s entry noted, among other things,
‘Stowaway finally too much of a nuisance. Time to bring him in.’
Sunan always knew what went on his
ship, from the lookout in the crow’s nest to the lowliest ship rat’s thieving
activities. His crew would swear on their mothers’ graves that he possessed an
intuitive sixth sense if not a full-fledged mind-reading capability. They
feared him, they respected him, and they were fiercely loyal to him.
Thus, when he boarded his ship after
dining at the Duke of Shippening’s, beckoned his first mate to his side, and
said: “There is a stowaway in the hold. Pretend you do not know and leave him
alone until I say otherwise. We sail at dawn,” no one had questioned him. No
one wondered how he knew about this stowaway whom no one else had spied; of
course, Captain Sunan would know. No one wondered why he did not have the
wretch tossed over the side into the murky harbor along with the rest of the
ship’s trash; Captain Sunan always had his reasons.
And if he decided now, six days into
the voyage, to drag the foreign creature up to his cabin and (presumably) split
him from stem to stern, Captain Sunan always knew best.
Two weathered sailors dragged the
stowaway suspended between them into Sunan’s cabin and dropped him at the
captain’s feet. The brown foreigner barked a string of angry curses in his
foreign tongue. One of the sailors kicked him in the ribs. “Stand in the
presence of your betters.” The foreigner cursed again. Though the words were
strange, the tone was unmistakably rude. The sailor kicked him again.
“Enough,” said Captain Sunan. He
rose. Sunan was a tall man and very thin, though, despite the thinness, he gave
the impression of great strength. He dressed, as always, impeccably, even amid
the rigors of a long sea voyage. He looked down at the stowaway, and his
piercing gaze was worse than the sailor’s kicks. The stowaway shut his mouth.
“Leave us,” Sunan said. The sailors
did not hesitate to obey, though they may have thought in the private depths of
their minds that it was unwise to leave their captain alone with the foreigner.
But if Sunan read minds as easily as they suspected, these were private
thoughts they dared not long entertain. They stood outside his cabin door,
which clicked shut behind them.
Lionheart gathered himself up from
his pile at the captain’s feet. The jester’s garb was stuffed inside his
server’s shirt, though the brilliantly colored fabrics spilled out the front.
He looked a fool, and the merchant captain could not fail to notice.
“Rise, boy,” Sunan said, using the
western tongue which Lionheart knew. Lionheart hastened to obey. He stood as
straight and tall as he could, calling into play all his princely bearing. But
somehow, in the merchant’s presence, he still felt as insignificant as the
kennel hand he had been these last many months. Sunan took a seat at his desk
again and regarded Lionheart as would a king on his throne regard a supplicant.
“Do you know,” said Sunan, his voice
just as comfortable in the western tongue as it was in his native dialect, “the
enemy you have made?”
“I beg your pardon, captain,”
Lionheart said, bowing quickly, “I meant no disrespect, I—”
“Not in myself,” the captain said.
He was the sort of man who, when he started speaking, other people stopped. It
wasn’t that he interrupted. Anything he had to say was certain to be more
important than anyone else’s, so how can that be called interrupting? “In the
Duke of Shippening.”
Lionheart gulped.
“That was a brave thing you did,”
Sunan continued. “Liberating a Faerie slave. Where I come from, it is a sin to
keep such people captive. A dangerous sin. Perhaps your people do not believe
this way.”
This seemed like a question, so
Lionheart dared reply. “I don’t think my people have any particular views on
the subject. We . . . we don’t interact with people of the other worlds. We
don’t usually believe in them . . . beyond superstition.” He shuddered at the
memory of the Dragon. “Until recently, that is.”
“Strange,” said Sunan. “Strange, for
you live very close to the other worlds.” His hands rested on the arms of his
chair, his whole body like a carved statue. “It takes great power to keep hold
of a Faerie slave.” His black eyes were narrow as he regarded Lionheart.
“Mortals cannot do so unless they are themselves very strong. Or allied with
someone stronger. You have made yourself a terrible enemy.”
In the silence that followed,
Lionheart considered Sunan’s face, trying to gauge whether or not he was
supposed to respond. He said at length, “I am not afraid of the Duke of
Shippening.”
“You should be. He is not the
buffoon he projects to the world. And his alliances are strong, though even I
cannot guess at them.” Sunan’s eye fixed on the bolt of brilliant-colored
fabric escaping from beneath Lionheart’s plain overshirt. Lionheart wished that
he dared either stuff it back in or pull it completely out, but he did not
move. He simply stood there looking like an idiot and hating his life.
His life which, now that he was a
captive stowaway, stood a good chance of being abruptly ended.
But Sunan said, “It was a foolish
but brave act to liberate the duke’s slave, and for this reason I have hidden
you on board the Kulap Kanya and will
bear you to safer lands. We will stop at many ports on our voyage back to the
city of my emperor. You may disembark at the harbor of your choice.”
Lionheart stood without breathing
for a long moment. Then he managed, “You—you will give me passage?”
“I will. You have the word of a
Pen-Chan, which is word you may trust.”
Lionheart did not know what this
meant exactly, but somehow he believed what the captain said. “I am trying to
reach Lunthea Maly.”
“The city of my emperor,” said
Sunan. “I will take you there.”
“I seek Ay-Ibunda. This temple is in
the city, yes?”
For the first time in the course of
their conversation, Lionheart saw Captain Sunan’s expression change. Only for a
moment. But in that unmistakable moment, Lionheart saw a flash of fear, or
dread, like lightning across the captain’s face. Then it was gone, and Sunan
spoke in the same even tones. “The Hidden Temple. You will not find it.”
“It is in the city, though, isn’t
it?”
“Lunthea Maly shelters the abode of
the Mother’s Mouth, yes.”
“Then someone must know where it is.
I’ll find direction.”
“No one may find the Hidden Temple
of Ay-Ibunda,” said Sunan. “No one knows where it hides save for Emperor
Molthisok-Khemkhaeng Niran himself. And he will not tell you.” Sunan rose
suddenly and took one stride across his cabin, standing nose to nose with
Lionheart. His gaze was nearly unbearable, and Lionheart only just managed to
meet him eye-to-eye.
“You are not a serving boy,” said
the captain. “No one would mistake you for the person you have disguised
yourself as. And you are not a man of Shippening. You hail from Southlands. The
stink of dragon smoke lingers about you.”
Lionheart said, “I hail from
Southlands, yes.”
“Who are you truly?”
“I will not tell you.”
“What is your name?”
“I will not tell you.”
“What has the Dragon promised you?”
“The Dragon has promised me
nothing.” Lionheart swallowed and almost immediately regretted his next words.
“I am going to kill him.”
Sunan drew a long breath. But his
face did not alter as he stood mere inches from Lionheart. When next he spoke,
his voice was very low. “There are those among my people who worship the Lady
and her Dark Brother. The Dragon.”
Lionheart said nothing.
“But,” Sunan continued, “I will,
nonetheless, bear you to Lunthea Maly. You have liberated a Faerie from the
Duke of Shippening’s enslavement. Perhaps you will liberate others. But be
forewarned, man of Southlands: should you, by some miracle, find your way to
Ay-Ibunda, and should you speak to the Mother’s Mouth, you will be given what
you ask. But the price at which it is given will be terrible.”
Lionheart nodded. “I’ve been warned.
Thank you.”
“What will you call yourself now you
have left behind all you know?”
“I am . . . .” Lionheart paused a
moment and licked his lips. “I am Leonard,” he said. Then he smiled. “Leonard
the Jester.”
“You are Leonard the Fool,” said
Captain Sunan.
The last line always chilled me. : )
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